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[poetrywriter]

[velcrow]

don't give up.

its just what they expect you to do.

Hey, what do you want, something profound in every verse? -eddie vedder

[reallygroovN]

there always is and always was and always will be hope, poetrywriter.

just take it a day at a time.....thinking past that is almost too much to bear sometimes.

what you are feeling is just that, a feeling. and you and only you have the power to change that feeling...

[Immortal]

title bullshit author zds date 1/27/01


...sometimes when my mind gets fuzzy i sit and decipher the moon
i relax into a state of not being, i burn both sides of your spoon
it's too hard to be lonely when there's a beauty such as you
in my life, not in my life.. nothing's ever true..
nevermind the bullshit, it's just life that's got me down
and if i was a little less fortunate it'd be easier to wear my crown.
open up, to see your picture.. doesn't quite look the same
as what i remember, what i believe... you've probably forgotten my name...

[poetrywriter]

This is good. I mean..this is damn good. And you pretty summed up how I
have been feeling lately. Can really relate to this one. Thanks.

Just wondering..have you ever thought about or tried to get your work
published? If not, you should. Have a great night.

[Immortal]

saw that you had deleted your post, and although i hadn't read it i did read the responses and pretty much figured out what you had been saying and feeling... so i tried to show that you weren't the only one. hopefully i succeeded.
as for getting my work published.. i haven't tried...probably will someday, but i haven't yet. thanks for asking though. i'm glad you liked the words. hope you feel better