rambled this in the shower.. wrote it down later on in the day

[Immortal]

title want her back author zds date 1/20/01

you stole my love, my future life
stole my dreams and future wife
and i want it back
yeah, yeah i want it back.
i stopped thinking on the day she left
to be with her in time
i stopped dreaming on the night you met
that someday she'd be mine
but i can't wait around much longer
i need my poor brain back
and i can't sit pretending to be stronger
than pseudonyms named "sad zach" -
you stole my love, my future life
stole my dreams and future wife
and i want it back
yeah, yeah i want it back.
she means more to me than ever to you
soulmate in heaven, she wouldn't argue
because some combine great, others merely fall
and just because you've won the battle doesn't mean you've built a wall
you stole my dreams of the perfect wife
and i want them back.

[anotherchild]

that was good
"i stopped thinking on the day she left"
very good

[takemyhand]

I stopped dreaming on the night you met. A depressing yet incredible line.

Anne

take my hand, not my picture

[brokenarrow]

Immortal......

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I like this, amazing it's just a rambling from the shower! I would write more Zach.....but I'm too tired right now....
thank you for the lovely read...

[jennie10]

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"The doctors are running out of patients. I ran out of patience a long time ago." Henry Rollins

[poetrywriter]

damn...I've said it before and I'll say it again..I wish my "ramblings"
were as well worded as yours.

*Mabye I should start doing that in the shower and stop the broken-
record crooning. haha

[anescence]

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[blue_rain]

thanks for sharing..i love reading words that inspire me to put pen to paper. it's amazing what you can think of whilst in the shower..

'The sun spawned a frown..and the sky grew old, cracked like an old china cup.
The shadows from the tree on the ground, grew legs and ran away. All because of what happened yesterday.' me.

"there is a lot to be said for not saying anything at all" ~ j. a.

[anotherchild]

"The shadows from the tree on the ground, grew legs and ran away."
how is it possible to think of something like that? all i can say is wow.

[blue_rain]

too much time and too many thoughts. too much coffee maybe too.


"there is a lot to be said for not saying anything at all" ~ j. a.

[anotherchild]

hahaha
have you ever tried pumpkin spice coffee? it's very good.

[blue_rain]

?! never heard of it! is this an american thing? (i'm a brit). we do black and white! just kidding, we have lattes and moccas too ;)

"there is a lot to be said for not saying anything at all" ~ j. a.

[anotherchild]

it's a Borders thing.
my sister works there and she got me a whole bunch for christmas

[Immortal]

a dollar to the first person who can name the artist, song title, album, and year this line (the subject) is taken from...


(...but in actuality, i'm just shamelessly bumping my own post for my own gain... i'm so mean...)

[Ger]

Just got out of my own blissful, hot, steamy, cleansing water blessing...

Zach...today I dedicate "I'm Open" to you...

(& I gladly bump this in your honour)

*All is Love, Love is All*

[Ger]

Another shameless boost...

Elvis Costello
Jump Up
'77

Never mind about the buck..my treat

*All is Love, Love is All*

[Immortal]

well, i'd gladly send you a dollar.. you certainly earned it.. but since you declined, i guess the dollar goes to me.

i didn't figure it to be a hard question... it was the song playing at the time, and i've always loved that line... costello's a great songwriter..

and also, thanks for the "i'm open" dedication... it's certainly applied these past few days..