new song Solitare [Archive]

low_light

07-10-2002, 02:19 AM

heres the lyrics and then listen as you read and give me a good critique. if you have time

Been laying here for six days or two
Stuck here for ages with symptoms of the blues

These walls crawl from white into midnight hue
Stretching the walls with the shadows and moods
*
Something dying to get out of here
Been stuck in this place for a day or a year
-
Its nothing I can do to make a smile
Maybe with a thought of you tonight
In my mind
Im just alone, tonight
-

broke a leg chasing after you
your ghost has left me falling over stones

I figure someday ill get off this ride
And stop playing this game and grow up sometime
*
im just dying to run out of here
and just hit the world, make everything clear
-
its nothing I can do to just smile
seems I need to make it worth while
maybe with a thought of moving from here
ill fall into pieces but not disappear

**
im just alone
im all alone
its alright

http://low_light_music.tripod.com/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderfiles/solitare.mp3

-low

this is kinda different i think

"everything that youve ever done wrong is the reason im driven.. striaght to tears"-cc

Not_Trapped

07-10-2002, 03:46 AM

dude save some money up-go into a studio and record that voice of yours properly-this stuff is too good to crackle and pop-this song is just beautiful man

dominic

"troubles and issues...we all have troubles-the world has issues"

Highway23

07-10-2002, 09:23 AM

David

this was amazing, by FAR your best song that I have heard.

So fucking good.

There once was a man from Nantuckit...

low_light

07-10-2002, 12:57 PM

thanks guys. it is kinda country in places i think hhehe

no idea where that one came from. maybe laying inside with a messed up leg for over a week does it to you

-low

"everything that youve ever done wrong is the reason im driven.. striaght to tears"-cc

Highway23

07-10-2002, 04:15 PM

i'm going to go and mess up my leg then! /images/laugh.gif

There once was a man from Nantuckit...

low_light

07-10-2002, 06:12 PM

believe me, jake. You dont want to have your knee cap decide to relocate to the side instead of the middle of your leg.

its almost been two weeks and i can barely drive my car. im just finally going to attempt going back to work. heh. i did kind of enjoy the vacation ;)

rock on!

low

"everything that youve ever done wrong is the reason im driven.. striaght to tears"-cc