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Immortal
06-24-2002, 08:11 PM
it's like a lullaby with punk arrangements.
5:04pm
well i jumbled up my indecision
thought about the life i've been livin'
realized you're all i'll ever need.
i drank the water from your roots
discussed minor attitudes and
bred the love i'd come to realize.
everything's been up, not down
i'm falling forward happy as a clown
the way you sing makes me seem out of place.
so i crumpled up the letters sent
heading south, these thoughts i vent
send me closer down to you.
this starving sickness in my gut,
smiling eyes breaking from my rut
gentle voice, and i can say no more..
everything's been up, not down
i'm falling for you, i can hear the sound
that way you sing makes me seem out of place.
5:09pm
zds
jennie10
06-24-2002, 09:15 PM
You wrote that in 5 minutes. It just took me 25 minutes to find the damn fry pot to cook tater tots in/images/crazy.gif/images/laugh.gif You're a damn genius Zach/images/cool.gif
"The doctors are running out of patients. I ran out of patience a long time ago." Henry Rollins
Immortal
06-24-2002, 09:27 PM
thanks jennie /images/smile.gif
i'm not really all that smart though
just good with words sometimes /images/tongue.gif
Immortal
06-25-2002, 02:02 AM
"moonshot"
10:51pm
smoking pot in the car-flooded parking lot
calling shots, staring up towards the sky
all along the truth's been mirrored by the alphabet
and all the questions all the questions kept me asking why
it's so easy, it's so easy
to know that life will never change
it's so easy, it's so easy
to replicate your brillance on the walls..i'm feeling strange.
after-effects and motion capture stills
participation artifacts at will
stumbled forward, tumbling backwards
vacant halls and well-lit canopies on my front lawn
never figured out all this lovey-dovey shit
what it takes, what it took i'll never know 'cause you're so full of it
words unspoken in the history of friendship never worried, hah... always worried
but it's so easy, it's so easy
to know that life will never ever change
it's so easy, it's so easy
to replicate your brillance on the walls.. i'm feeling strange.
and if you never figure it out, i'm in love with you
(just thought that you should know)
and if it never mattered anyhow, thanks for playing along
(but now i've got to go)
and waste my time with somebody else, somebody else
talk to no one, forty days of silence does the trick
body lying there emotionless, catatonic symbiotic
no one notice as i slip away, slip away..
but it's so easy, easy
to know that life will never change, never change
it's so easy, so fucking easy
to replicate our brillance on the walls, you're out of range...
10:58pm
zds
Immortal
06-25-2002, 02:08 AM
sorry, this is the last one from me. then i'll stop cluttering your board.
"his name"
11:01pm
i know just what you're doing, i know it's in my head
i know that everything i've hated has you now in bed
i know that he might love you,
i know it's just the same
i know that you won't ever be mine
i know you call his name.
i know that everything you've told me could easily be taken away
i know that if i called you now, you would have nothing to say
i know just what you've been doing
i know that i won't be loved
i know everything that you've been saying
i know he fits you like a glove
i know that life isn't fair at anytime
i know that it's just a game
i know that i'll spend my whole night crying
i know you call his name.
11:03pm
zds
hey, it's your board too.
don't care about about the other people here..they are stupid.
takemyhand
06-25-2002, 10:39 PM
um, amazing words immortal...glad you shared them /images/smile.gif
13throwcenter
06-25-2002, 10:41 PM
you write some amazing stuff, zach.
i can't believe it comes out of your head so quickly.
thank you, honestly, for sharing.
"she is rising above"
jennie10
06-25-2002, 10:51 PM
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"The doctors are running out of patients. I ran out of patience a long time ago." Henry Rollins
Immortal
06-26-2002, 01:24 AM
10:12pm
maria and saul, two american lovers
one loved the women, the other loved strangers
saul worked downtown in the old vaudeville show
playing magic with cards so maria couldn't know
the kind of life that her parents tried so hard to escape
avoiding the mountaintops and alleys full of rape
saul loved maria, and maria loves saul
sometimes that's enough when there's nothing else at all.
saul and maria, they've got a stable to feed now
been together so long they'd recognize one another
in the dark where the pillows lay. saul hardly sleeps
merely shuffling the time away; peaceful, maria keeps
pushing away in the thoughts, subconcious
and as saul's arm tightens up, she remains unresponsive
so in his last moment, saul is left wondering
if his maria will let him lie there, it's a troubling
thought to have to bear in the final moments of young life
cursing yourself for betraying your lovely wife
saul loved maria, and maria still loves saul
sometimes that's enough when there's nothing left at all.
10:19pm
zds
13throwcenter
06-26-2002, 01:38 AM
i think it is your range of content that amazes me the most.
great work.
"she is rising above"
Highway23
06-26-2002, 10:05 AM
Zach, please share more. You're amazing, simply amazing
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jennie10
06-26-2002, 10:00 PM
You're badass Zach. Just like Steve Earle and Johnny Carwash/images/cool.gif
This one is my new favorite/images/smile.gif
"The doctors are running out of patients. I ran out of patience a long time ago." Henry Rollins
Johnny Carwash
06-27-2002, 12:39 AM
7 fucking minutes
dammit man! /images/smile.gif
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