View Full Version : two years ago today, life changed incredibly... this has nothing to do with that
Immortal
01-04-2001, 02:38 PM
two images should load.. (i hope they do anyway).. let them do so to experience it all.. thanks, as always
http://www.geocities.com/zds20002000/anger1.jpg
http://www.geocities.com/zds20002000/anger2.jpg
jennie10
01-04-2001, 03:03 PM
I like this one. /images/crazy.gif
"I allow myself true love, a love that is invincible-I love music" Henry Rollins
brokenarrow
01-05-2001, 03:57 AM
hmmmmmmm.....what can I say Immortal....
I felt the anger come right through the screen. I hope you don't mind this, what I'm gonna say next...........
I know it was late, and your thoughts were confused......please, please, please.........
always keep that anger on paper only......
ok?
don't ever hurt yourself over her.......or anyone else for that matter.......
there WILL be light shining in your direction some day.....you just have to be patient...patient for that right girl to come into your life........
then........the titles we read will have the word "Love" in them?? perhaps? /images/smile.gif
I would personally "Love" to see you write a piece about "Healing the Soul" in the year 2001...
/images/smile.gif 12 months to start healing yourself....Jan. - Dec....each day...feel better about where it's at. That would be grand.....and I think everyone here feels the same way!
I want you to heal....
love, broken>
ps....hope I'm not out of line expressing my thoughts.....
Immortal
01-05-2001, 01:22 PM
Immortal
01-05-2001, 01:31 PM
"my head hurts, my spine/his penis puts illegitimacy on decline"
my favorite line in the whole thing...just thought i'd point that out..
EdHead
01-05-2001, 05:27 PM
Wow...totally amazing once again..
you blow me away sometimes.
share
01-05-2001, 06:12 PM
i'm with broken - it's the mom in us!! - i
want you to comfort you, let you know that
there is so much love out there
your writing always makes me sad, makes me feel like your in pain and i ache for you - that's why i don't reply,
because it feels like you need to be in pain -
like it's some self-flagellant need you are
fulfilling
wish this was all just fiction that you write,
(i don't think it is??)
keep writing
better out than in - for all of us
(forget about a goverthard? - i can't read that?)
Immortal
01-05-2001, 06:35 PM
"off the top of the shine that don't shine anymore/forget about a courtyard, beat his ass right on the floor.."
i think that's the line, isn't it share? i admit, i'm surprised no one else commented on messy writing.. even i get confused sometimes.
but thank you, everyone that's responded... i basically said it all to broken> .... so yeah.. just read that one. thanks again
brokenarrow
01-06-2001, 03:17 AM
Yeah...I definately understand about writing it all down on paper....I admire people who can do that....
you don't know how happy I am to hear you say....
"i know that there will be sunlight someday.. and that's not to say there isn't sunlight now..."
/images/smile.gif.....that really made me feel good, made me feel postive that some day..(although we never forget our first loves), you will be alright! I think we all have gone through it at one point or another....love can be great, or one of the most painful emotions we can ever experience...
Geez! Share and I are like the Mommy Hens huh? That's because we care about you!/images/smile.gif/images/smile.gif
oh....and one more thing young man.....
YOU HAVE VERY MESSY, MESSY HANDWRITING!
heh......heh......
love, broken>/images/cool.gif
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