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[Immortal]

[poetrywriter]

Great read, Immortal. I'd leave it just the way it is. Remember..sometimes the first word is the best word. Keep posting!

[brokenarrow]

this makes my heart ache...
but the one thing I've learned as I've grown older, is never to allow my mind to snub someone, it could be a future soul mate who is snubbed, and that would be a shame.....it's always good to keep your heart and mind open to love, it happens when you least expect it!......

sometimes immortal, I find I have too much love to share....and I'm not talking about love as in a man and woman love, or relationship love....I mean love for the world, for people I don't even know, or perhaps have yet to meet....and I find there is pain even in that. I try to love everything, everyone......it's stupid I know, it only opens the gate for hurt and pain...
I think sometimes, when I read your words I always try to find a way they can relate to me and how I am....your words cross so many boundaries, can convey so much thought......I'm very grateful, it helps me to realise I'm not the only one who questions all of this "Love"......

there's one line from Grievance that really get's to my heart..........
"I want to taste......everyone that I see"

it's how I feel.......I guess it can be viewed as a fault, I don't know anymore.