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Immortal
11-01-2000, 09:37 PM
Immortal
11-02-2000, 02:46 PM
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11-02-2000, 05:13 PM
you know i love reading these - i'm just
haven't thought of how to respond yet, just
didn't want you to feel - unread!
thanks
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Immortal
11-02-2000, 07:09 PM
poetrywriter
11-02-2000, 07:59 PM
Nice words, Immortal. Thanks for that.
I thought that this would be a better place to post one of my poems, but I think they would take away from the great work you post here. So as far as I'm concerned..this forum is for the great Immortal! :)
Look forward to reading more. :)
anescence
11-03-2000, 02:25 AM
I want to tell you how much I like your poems, but I can't come up with the words to express the emotion. And, I like it! doesn't seem enough,but for now it is the best I can do.
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RrVwMirror
11-03-2000, 03:56 AM
I too read your words, love your words, yet feel that any response I could make to such poetry is insignificant.....I can never find the right words....
Immortal
11-03-2000, 03:47 PM
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11-03-2000, 06:04 PM
sigh - so nice :)
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anescence
11-04-2000, 03:18 AM
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JackieAlive
11-04-2000, 11:20 AM
Hi Immortal,
hey, I said I missed your poems, now I got more than one. That's nice. I like your poetry.
"I walked a memories existence all the way to see you", that's a great sentence. This poem to me sounds like there should be music to it. It's like a story, music for a movie.
The rest of the poems do as well sound great. About words - well words can be your home, but they are tricky, you see. So, watch out. And keep on writing.
Jackie
EdHead
11-04-2000, 06:42 PM
Thanks Immortal /images/smile.gif
I always enjoy reading your work /images/smile.gif/images/smile.gif/images/smile.gif
brokenarrow
11-11-2000, 02:41 PM
Uniquely Personal 'Poems'..........
from our beloved Immortal. The first one made me get tears in my eyes....and a giant lump in my throat.................
the rest leave me with no words to describe what I feel when I read about your pain.......
love, broken>
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