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[Immortal]

[brokenarrow]

/images/shocked.gifWow Zach! That was truly wonderful, I think my favorite metaphor has to be "perennially forsaken, up until I met you."
I loved that line in the beginning....and then you put it in at the end again.
I pictured a flower, whose head comes up year after year...no one seems to notice it's beauty, until one day....an innocent happens upon it, and is inspired by it's uniqueness.....
Seperated from everything else, and then never igonored again.....
The intensity of feeling that love, and never being able to shake it....day after day, year after year......amazing Zach.....
nice one./images/smile.gif
Bravo,,,,,,see? I must have missed this one on Synergy with all of the bullshit posts running rampant. Please feel free to post other things you've posted on Synergy....
love, brokenarrow>

[jennie10]

I like this one too. Your stuff doesn't go over my head. I like these words:

i loved you so much, and my heart is now there
lying on the floor, with as much despair




"I allow myself true love, a love that is invincible-I love music" Henry Rollins

[Hund]

I like poems...~

[anescence]

I like it!!/images/smile.gif Please post more.