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Immortal
02-20-2001, 01:09 AM
title ... author zds date 2/19/01

i vomit when i think that she's with him instead
vicious thoughts surround me pillow blankets in my head
stood beside her night and day, i'm standing always still
kneeling before her but to never fall so ill
as i do tonight, as i must right now
as i did tonight, as i will right now.
i cry when thinking that he's better (?) that i don't play the part
of who i am, who i must be, in and out my heart
can't take the pictures mental, physical too
of how it all started.. they were drunk, they were fools
and now i'm stuck i'll be lonely for life
he took my one, my chance at a wife
it's not worth the bother i don't care anymore
so i shut the chapter, close the door.

takemyhand
02-20-2001, 08:40 AM
Thank you for sharing this. You can truly feel the emotions running through you, and as always it's beautiful. Have you really closed the door?

Anne

take my hand, not my picture

jennie10
02-20-2001, 08:39 PM
/images/frown.gifThis one makes me sad/images/frown.gif
And also makes me want to slap her around for not knowing what she has/images/shocked.gif

"The doctors are running out of patients. I ran out of patience a long time ago." Henry Rollins