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of_the_girl
12-10-2003, 03:51 PM
my brain's loose change
she molds her thoughts like clay
into something more tangible
like poetry
like a song
she can sing
when she's walking alone

the snowflakes fall
on her brown hair
and she melts
from the cold

she's a backwards girl
with backwards thoughts
thinking she could
write
something
awe-inspiring

but she can't

so she melts
at the touch of a
snowflake...
her words just a puddle
on the ground
you all walk on...

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

I just had to write *something* so don't base your opinions on my writing off of this poem... *sighs*

Not_Trapped
12-10-2003, 05:10 PM
i LIKE it - hi hi

of_the_girl
12-10-2003, 05:11 PM
thank you :)

hi yourself ;)

Not_Trapped
12-10-2003, 05:13 PM
are you in the silly lab?

it's snowing

of_the_girl
12-10-2003, 05:15 PM
No, I'm in my dorm room. :)

I know, it is snowing. I love snow. Weeeeeeeeeee

Not_Trapped
12-10-2003, 05:17 PM
daughter

of_the_girl
12-10-2003, 05:21 PM
you bastard!

hehehehhehehehehehhe, just kiddin'